User talk:Cebeck/Magmatic water
Hello Cebeck, I have reviewed your article for Magmatic water as of yesterday afternoon. Hope it helps. Rsvetlov (talk) 05:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
George's comments
editI like the amount of detail that you have added. The image is useful, make sure it is one that can be used on Wikipedia with no copyright issues. I am not as taken by an article that begins with a topic other than the one that is the title of the page. Something along the lines of Magmatic water is an aqueous phase containing a set of minerals that have been dissolved by the action of magma".
I am a little confused about the equation that you have added to the water in silicate melts section. It isn't balanced and doesn't make a lot of sense to me. I think it is OK to just state what compounds are formed in equilibrium without using an equation. --Drglheard (talk) 16:26, 11 March 2021 (UTC)