User talk:Candle bb lady/sandbox

I think my concerns about doing a Poppy Sharp biography page are being borne out here, and the evidence for this is the one citation you have. I know you've been looking into other sources, but I really think this should become a BPUM page rather than a page just about Sharp. I would also say that you should look carefully at the kind of language that you use: "claim to fame" isn't the kind of phrase that fits too well on Wikipedia.Colbuendia71 (talk) 18:21, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

I agree with most of what ^^^ says, as well as what we've discussed in class on Monday. You have interesteing information here, but you don't have enough information. Merging this into a larger section (maybe even into my page in the African American Culture section?) Your language is good and concise, but there are places you could be less subjective (claim to fame) or rewrite the language to fit more inline with wikipedia standards (org name - to - the name of the organization). I think you've got a great start and i would be happy to help if you wanted to merge sections, and i look forward to seeing what else you can put in here. Rustygreaves (talk) 19:21, 16 November 2016 (UTC)