Callystahansen
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:55, 29 January 2019 (UTC)
Cally H's Peer Review edit
I feel that the lead section does a very good job of summarizing your article. Make sure that you include a citation for the last statement, although it feels like a very sudden change in topic and does not have much of an explanation
The overall structure of your article flows well and is organized in an efficient manner that allows your readers to easily find any specific information they are looking for on the topic. The use of different subject headers is nice as it helps to break up the information better.
All content takes a neutral tone, which is good.
There are several sections that I feel lack adequate amounts of sources, such as "SRY-positive" and "Treatment". Aside from that, your sources look good and seem to come from reliable journals/places.
I feel that your article is very well written, you may want to look at further explaining those sections where you have provided less information and sources to really get the idea across about XX Male Syndrome. Again, I really liked the use of subject headers to clearly organize the information. I feel that the most important thing that you can work on would be to bring in more sources and provide more of an explanation of the images embedded on the page.
Callystahansen (talk) 02:36, 8 April 2019 (UTC) Cally HCallystahansen (talk) 02:36, 8 April 2019 (UTC)