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First of all , here is not even a real indication that the firm might be important. A Wikipedia article needs to show notability with references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. You do not have any. Until you have them, there is no reason to continue to try to write the article, for it will not be accepted here, no matter how well you write it.

As for promotionalism, include only material that would be of interest to a general reader coming across the mention of the subject and wanting the sort of information that would be found in an encyclopedia. Do not include material that would be of interest only to prospective clients --that sort of content is considered promotional. Among this is a detailed description of the interior of your coaches, selling points about how convenient you are to particular tourist destinations, Do not stress routine trivia, such as that you have been government certified as meeting the minimum requirements, and are a member of the usual industry associations. You are automatically thinking in terms of what the subject wishes to communicate to the public, but an uninvolved person will think in terms of what the public might wish to know. I am not really sure whether there will be enough suitable content for an article. DGG ( talk ) 23:03, 15 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

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