User talk:Buster7/Eugenia Doris Erwin Bizzaro
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Buster7 in topic Ping SusunW
Not a Muralist edit
I started this article because of this diff. I didn't want the artist to get "lost. And as a learning on "How to...... Buster Seven Talk 14:49, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
Ping SusunW edit
SusunW. I know we are right in the middle of getting the Appel article to go live but I wanted you to check this draft that I started (kind of inadvertently) just a moment ago. I.m still not sure of "remove the first two lines" Thanks. Buster Seven Talk 14:57, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- You are perfectly fine. You did it correctly, just get rid of those lines that tell you to submit it as a draft. AfC is not your friend. Just remember that the lede is uncited and a summary of all the rest of it, so build in the biography part. I find it easier to summarize the lede info after I have written the bio, but I usually put the "why are they notable in the first line or two. SusunW (talk) 15:04, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- SusunWBTW...Who is "Sue". You mention her at the other article...just curious, Also, I have been approved for newspapers,com by Hazel. I'm gonna use this draft as a "learning site". Slow and steady....so it sinks in. I have to repeat the steps so they sink in. Buster Seven Talk 21:20, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- You are perfectly fine. You did it correctly, just get rid of those lines that tell you to submit it as a draft. AfC is not your friend. Just remember that the lede is uncited and a summary of all the rest of it, so build in the biography part. I find it easier to summarize the lede info after I have written the bio, but I usually put the "why are they notable in the first line or two. SusunW (talk) 15:04, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
Collecting possible "stuff" while learning "How to...." edit
In a Nov 2009 attack Blane Bizzaro slashed his wife of 17 years, Eugenia Bizzaro, after an argument at the couple’s residence in an Oceanside mobile home park. The attack resulted in "two deep gashes across her forehead".
- There is a trail that leads to the San Diego paper from 2009 but I'm not sure if its even her. so I will fill in more of the bio as I find the time. I want to pursue HER ART career rather than her life as the wife of a drunk. Buster Seven Talk 15:47, 11 May 2016 (UTC)