User talk:Bsward/Birth control in the United States

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyragrace21 in topic Peer Review

The two photos I added are with their texts. Bsward (talk) 13:29, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

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I thought your article topic was really interesting and a topic of high importance. Your pictures seemed to be really relevant to the article sections and the topic as a whole. The only thing I would really say is that the second sentence in the affordable care act image could sound a little more neutral. Katebalcom (talk) 18:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

I think both of your pictures are good representations of your article section. You also have proper citations of your pictures. I think both the captions of your pictures need to be more descriptive of the pictures and not so much about the information about the product in the picture. Kyragrace21 (talk) 13:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)Kyragrace21Reply