User talk:Brianmatthewvosburg/sandbox

Peer Review (Carson Allen)

Hello Brian, I enjoyed reading through your article on the Kutai Basin. You provided quality information on the topic, and it was a pleasure reading it. I know you have not fully finished yet, so I will not be too critical. Watch for grammatical errors, as I have seen several. One error is two repeated periods in the first introduction paragraph (4 lines down). Keep things simple. Wikipedia articles can be technical, but make sure you do not overcomplicate things for the readers who do not study geology. Try to add figures and bulletin points to your article as well so you can keep the reader fairly entertained. Your sedimentation section for instance contains too much complicated text. Your article has good information, it just needs to flow better. I recommend that you look at other articles as example on how to edit.