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Your submission at Articles for creation: Botler AI (June 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chaotic Enby was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 00:04, 1 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Botshistory! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 00:04, 1 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi there, I'm new to Wiki editing and I would love to get your help and any feedback you have to offer. Could you kindly point to one or two specific areas of the draft that impacted your decision, to help guide me in the right direction of where to start revising? Thanks! Botshistory (talk) 15:20, 1 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks a lot for the reply! Things like providing quotes from the founder about the company's mission might be seen as non-neutral, while lead sentences such as Botler aims to provide the average person with an impartial resource to empower them to pursue their rights through information and education might sound more like what you'd find on the company's website than on a neutral encyclopedia.
On the bright side, sources are pretty reliable, although a good tip to help avoid "promotional-sounding" stuff is to use secondary sources rather than primary claims like interviews. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 15:50, 1 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you so much for the feedback and reply, I really appreciate it. I tried to incorporate your feedback into the latest draft, which I just published. Please tell me if it looks good, or there are other specific sections you'd recommend taking a look at. Thank you! Botshistory (talk) 18:06, 3 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

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