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Latest comment: 26 days ago by Suitskvarts in topic Your submission at Articles for creation: Botler AI (June 27)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Botler AI (June 1)
edit Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chaotic Enby was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Botler AI and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Hello, Botshistory!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 00:04, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Hi there, I'm new to Wiki editing and I would love to get your help and any feedback you have to offer. Could you kindly point to one or two specific areas of the draft that impacted your decision, to help guide me in the right direction of where to start revising? Thanks! Botshistory (talk) 15:20, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for the reply! Things like providing quotes from the founder about the company's mission might be seen as non-neutral, while lead sentences such as
Botler aims to provide the average person with an impartial resource to empower them to pursue their rights through information and education
might sound more like what you'd find on the company's website than on a neutral encyclopedia.
On the bright side, sources are pretty reliable, although a good tip to help avoid "promotional-sounding" stuff is to use secondary sources rather than primary claims like interviews. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 15:50, 1 June 2024 (UTC)- Thank you so much for the feedback and reply, I really appreciate it. I tried to incorporate your feedback into the latest draft, which I just published. Please tell me if it looks good, or there are other specific sections you'd recommend taking a look at. Thank you! Botshistory (talk) 18:06, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for the reply! Things like providing quotes from the founder about the company's mission might be seen as non-neutral, while lead sentences such as
Your submission at Articles for creation: Botler AI (June 27)
edit Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Suitskvarts was:
The comment the reviewer left was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Botler AI and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.