Bogark16

Roman Fever

Hello, and thank you for contributing to Wikipedia. However, I have removed your recent additions to Roman Fever for the time being, because they contained substantial errors. The issues include style errors such as capitalizing every word in a section header (Wikipedia uses sentence case) and odd unexplained numbers in the text, like (4). If these are meant as citation numbers, that's simply not how that's done. There are also a lot of incomplete sentences and other grammatical errors. I also need to ask that you not use the nowiki tag until you understand how to do so properly, as it can damage the readability of a page when used incorrectly.

I don't mean to dissuade you from contributing. On the whole, this looks like useful content, but it needs significant cleanup before being resubmitted. Other editors can always step in and fix minor issues, but the onus is really on the contributor to make a submission as correct as possible. If I can help with anything, please let me know. Thanks, Jessicapierce (talk) 20:31, 8 December 2018 (UTC)