User talk:Bobby122/Archives/2010/September

Thanks!

You beat me at my own user page revert. Thank you! MJ₉₄ 01:47, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

No problem! Glad to help. Bobby122 Contact Me (C) 01:48, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

Dear Mr bobby.

i did not vandalize the JFHS page. i live there and provided an accurate account of what the location is like. please done fine me with such accusations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.53.65.213 (talk) 02:44, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

There are no references provided. You only received a warning, if you make constructive edits with references to back them up you should be fine. Bobby122 Contact Me (C) 02:50, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

Re: Heart Lake Secondary School

You're welcome! I saw that you had reverted some of it, but that it went back pretty far. So I thought I'd try and finish fixing it. Hopefully the vandals stop, but I put it on my watchlist just in case. MissAmericaGirl (talk) 23:59, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

Joe Stretch

Hey there, I'm new to wiki. I'm trying to do a page for the novelist Joe Stretch. He's just done this big story for the band Hurts, who are currently number 1 all over Europe. He's on their wiki but there's no link, so I tried to make one. You suggested my article be deleted. Would you be willing to give me some constructive criticism? All the best, Arthur —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aftermaths (talk • contribs) 00:32, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

In order for an article to be written about him he must meet the guidelines written here. Regards, Bobby122 Contact Me (C) 00:36, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

Ok, well this person is an internationally published novelist and an academic. Is it my sources that are wrong. Sorry to be a pain. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aftermaths (talk • contribs) 00:41, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

I don't see that mentioned in the article. Bobby122 Contact Me (C) 00:46, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

Hey there. I've had another go. Feedback? (Can't seem to capitalize the S in the heading - very annoying)

It has been deleted by an admin. Bobby122 Contact Me (C) 01:06, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

I've had another go using a similar writer as a template. any good? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aftermaths (talk • contribs) 01:32, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

I' still not seeing notability. The article says, "To considerable acclaim" but does not explain how considerable the novel was.

But then The external links link to good reviews by respected critics in internationally respected newspapers. Should I quote from these directly? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aftermaths (talk • contribs) 01:44, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

Also, I'm only seeing reviews from the UK only and not from other sources outside of the UK. Therefore this article does not pass these guidelines and will have to be tagged for speedy deletion.

Ok, no problem. I'll find some reviews from Germany and Italy, too. Thanks for your help. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aftermaths (talk • contribs) 01:53, 10 September 2010 (UTC)