Bnchow

Hello! I'm practicing leaving a message on your Talk page! Dodarm (talk) 17:45, 20 December 2018 (UTC)

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:06, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review

• I like that you included a bit of history regarding “juvenile hypothalamosis syndrome”.
• I would be hesitant to say that there are “three types of FHA” or “causes”, I think that you could instead say that it is multifactorial with links to stress, weight loss, and exercise, or that these are factors that contribute to the pathophysiology of FHA.
• The last paragraph under “Stress-Related Factors” is missing a reference source.
• There are few typos/misspellings that can be corrected.
• Great comprehensive review of the effects of FHA on other organ systems.
• Overall, the article reads well. There are some places where the writing can be simplified for better readership. However there is good organization and a lot of good hyperlinks to other Wiki articles that should help the reader given the complexity of the topic.

Dodarm (talk) 17:40, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

A goat for you!

Great collaborating with you!

Dodarm (talk) 01:54, 10 January 2019 (UTC)