Your submission at Articles for creation edit

 
Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.

Feedback on Playwarestudios Asia Pte Ltd article edit

Hi Theonesean,

Thank you for your feedback on my article Playware Studios Asia Pte Ltd, I've made edits as per your suggestions to give it a more encyclopedic tone. I hope you can reconsider.

Link to article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Playware_Studios_Pte_Ltd

Thanks and best regards,

Blitzio (talk) 09:37, 5 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Blitzio, it looks good. It's not good for the same reviewer to rerev the same article over and over. I'm sure someone else will review it soon. If it goes more than a week, contact me again and I'll take a look. Thanks, TheOneSean [ U | T | C ] 05:26, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

I received your email edit

I prefer to discuss things "on-wiki." If you need to reach me in the future, please post on my talk page or where there is already a discussion. You can also add an {{afc comment}} to your submission right above the text of your submission and below any existing "afc comment" templates. I will likely leave this submission for another reviewer to review.

By the way, the OTRS permission regarding File:Playware Studios Asia Pte Ltd Logo.png will need to come from the copyright owner, not from you (unless of course, you are the owner). Also, until the OTRS permission arrives it is best to treat this as a WP:FAIRUSE image rather than a free one. This means don't use it in any non-article page. Nobody is going to get mad at you if the permission arrives within a week or two, but after a month things will get dicey. You may have to change the permission to "fair use" and replace the image with a lower-quality image. If there is no actual article by the time that happens you may have to let the image be deleted then after the article exists, re-upload a low-quality version as a "fair use" image. davidwr/(talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail) 14:34, 5 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

On wiki Davidwr edit

Hi Davidwr, apologies for not keeping the discussion on wiki, I'm still new at this. Appreciate your advice and comments. Cheers and have a great week ahead. Blitzio (talk) 08:22, 6 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation edit

 
Playware Studios, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!

Nathan2055talk - contribs 16:11, 17 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Welcome Blitzio!

Now that you've joined Wikipedia, there are 47,445,125 users!
Hello, Blitzio. Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions! I'm Nathan2055, one of the other editors here, and I hope you decide to stay and help contribute to this amazing repository of knowledge.
Some pages of helpful information to get you started:
    Introduction to Wikipedia
    The five pillars of Wikipedia
    Editing tutorial
    How to edit a page
    Simplified Manual of Style
    The basics of Wikicode
    How to develop an article
    How to create an article
    Help pages
    What Wikipedia is not
Some common sense Do's and Don'ts:
    Do be bold
    Do assume good faith
    Do be civil
    Do keep cool!
    Do maintain a neutral point of view
    Don't spam
    Don't infringe copyright
    Don't edit where you have a conflict of interest
    Don't vandalize
    Don't get blocked
If you need further help, you can:
    Ask a question
or even:
    Ask an experienced editor to "adopt" you

Alternatively, leave me a message at my talk page or type {{helpme}} here on your talk page, and someone will try to help.

There are many ways you can contribute to Wikipedia. Here are a few ideas:
    Fight vandalism
    Be a WikiFairy or a WikiGnome
    Help contribute to articles
           
    Perform maintenance tasks
    Become a member of a project that interests you
    Help design new templates

Remember to always sign your posts on talk pages. You can do this either by clicking on the   button on the edit toolbar or by typing four tildes (~~~~) at the end of your post. This will automatically insert your signature, a link to this (your talk) page, and a timestamp.

The best way to learn about something is to experience it. Explore, learn, contribute, and don't forget to have some fun!
To get some practice editing you can use a sandbox. You can create your own private sandbox for use any time. Perfect for working on bigger projects. Then for easy access in the future, you can put {{My sandbox}} on your user page. By the way, seeing as you haven't created a user page yet, simply click here to start it.

Sincerely, Nathan2055talk - contribs 16:11, 17 June 2013 (UTC)   (Leave me a message)Reply

Nathan2055talk - contribs 16:11, 17 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Talkback edit

 
Hello, Blitzio. You have new messages at Talk:Playware_Studios.
Message added 16:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

QuantifiedElf (talk) 16:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ayondo (September 1) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Fiddle Faddle 15:25, 1 September 2016 (UTC)Reply


 
Hello! Blitzio, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Fiddle Faddle 15:25, 1 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

In response to Articles for creation: Ayondo (September 1) rejection by Timtrent edit

@Timtrent: I understand, thanks for the constructive feedback and guidance on where I went wrong with this. I'm still learning and this would be the second Wikipedia article I'm attempting to work on. After reading your comment, I think I have a better idea as to what can be improved on the article. I'll go back and ensure it doesn't comprise regurgitated press releases. It wasn't my intention to create an advert. I'll ensure I put together a more notable and independent published sources and ensure the article comes out with a more encyclopedic tone rather than something that resembles PR/marketing material. Blitzio (talk) 15:56, 1 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

What I suggest is that you start by researching references. Gather them together and see what they say. Turn what they say into facts that are cited by the reference, and create fair, continuous prose around the bare facts. You may need to start for the bottom up.
There is no need to attempt to make the article everything you feel it should be. You only need enough to get it accepted. So you need to demonstrate its passing WP:GNG, and use references to verify that. Fiddle Faddle 16:02, 1 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Question edit

What is your connection with ayondo? Do you have a conflict of interest that should be declared? Robert McClenon (talk) 06:38, 16 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi @Robert McClenon: thanks for getting in touch. I am disclosing to you that I am an employee of ayondo and would therefore fall under connected contributor. As per the guidelines of Wikipedia, I have since updated my User page to declare this, and the article Talk page as well to ensure transparency and full disclosure. Thanks for your understanding. Blitzio (talk) 12:19, 28 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
Hi again @Robert McClenon: please may I request for you to take a look at the information I've provided, such as my declarations as per the wiki guidelines and if you could consider removing the maintenance template if possible. Thanks for your consideration. Blitzio (talk) 09:22, 30 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
User:Blitzio - The maintenance template says that a conflict of interest editor contributed. That is true. I do not plan to review the article in depth to verify that it is neutral and so do not plan to remove the template. Please do not be in too much of a hurry to get the template removed, or you will annoy the volunteer editors. I will ask for advice about where you may ask for removal of the template, but just wait. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:25, 30 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
User:Robert McClenon - Ok understood, thanks for clarifying, I'll sit tight, appreciate your efforts. Blitzio (talk) 16:45, 30 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Nomination of Ayondo for deletion edit

 

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Ayondo is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ayondo until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Light2021 (talk) 17:52, 30 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

One account edit

Please be aware that you are to use only one account. Best Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 02:32, 4 September 2018 (UTC)Reply