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Latest comment: 8 years ago by Vellichor in topic Draft feedback

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Good references.

My only suggestion for your sentences would be to avoid saying "...can be distinguished from the above disorders..." and instead either relist the other syndromes you just named or simply say "...can be distinguished from these disorders..."

Great start!

Vellichor (talk) 18:15, 4 November 2015 (UTC)Reply