User talk:Bernier4a/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Bernier4a

The article on the NHL player, Dan Frawley, was very well written, however there was no use of citations throughout the piece. The author may take note to use a reference other than the players biography from the hockey hall of fame as it may prove to be biased in his representation. There could be additions to his family life and childhood, life after he retired, as well as his status as a First Nations individual.Bernier4a (talk) 01:34, 16 March 2017 (UTC)Reply