Benjamin.aviles1
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:10, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
Content addition to Violent crime - relevance to New Zealand edit
Hi Benjamin.aviles1,
I see you recently added content to the New Zealand section of the Violent crime article. I question the relevance to New Zealand of a paragraph about a United Kingdom Intimate Partner Violence study. I would have expected New Zealand research. Please discuss in the relevant section on the page Talk:Violent crime. At the same time you might also like to discuss your un-cited assertion that Intimate Partner Violence is a sexual offence (and by its placement only in New Zealand). I think the issue is that this new content has been misplaced rather than being wrong, but I want to see where it can be best placed for improving the article rather than simply removing it. Hence the need for discussing content placement and having citations to verify every editor's contributions. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
Violent Crime Peer Review edit
Hi Benjamin,
I just posted my peer review in one of your sandboxes titled User:Benjamin.aviles1/Violent crime/Alexaneybold Peer review. I hope you enjoy reading my review and looking at my suggestions. The article edit looks great, good job! Alexaneybold (talk) 18:42, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
wci peer review edit
After reading the article about violent crimes I understand the discussion of countries and their crimes and how they differentiate with each other.I believe this was a neutral wiki because each country was brought up in a correct manner without bringing each other down. I saw that there were a lot of resources within a tiny article which helps create a better understanding on what is being talked about, when there is many resources that provides information. I also saw there was a comment on the page about a section change that seemed to be very helpful because it was saying to not just list the crimes but also make known the other effects rather than just naming the crime. Using wiki helps people give reviews because there is always room for more information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marissaescalante2 (talk • contribs) 15:20, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
WCI Feedback edit
This wiki page talks about how crime affects countries differently and how they're reported/taken care of. As crime is a very controversial discussion it's quite easy to form an opinion on this topic. The information is very balanced as it attracts readers in, and the editors gives sources to back up information, such as crime statistics. The information in this article can be seen as very neutral as the information is very balanced and doesn't counterclaim against the other countries data/stats.
Peer Review Feedback edit
Hi Benjamin,
Just wanted to thank you for the constructive feedback you gave me! You had a lot of good suggestions and I did my best to satisfy all of them. I added more information about specific offenders and added a graph in to show homicide rates throughout America. I enjoyed reading your review. Goodluck with the last week of class! Alexaneybold (talk) 23:24, 12 March 2021 (UTC)