User talk:Belicimo/sandbox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Mkh1206 in topic Peer Review 2

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Hi Belicimo, This looks like it will be a very informative article for readers looking up information on this historic place. The first paragraph is a good definition and sets up a nice overview of what is to come. As a reader, in the following sections I would like to learn more about the architecture and landscape of the Mansion and land, the events that are held at the mansion by the city of Rockwell, and about the art gallery. The picture, map and table are all very helpful and informative too! Perhaps put the table “U.S. National Register of Historic Places in Maryland” above the references and external links. Keep up the good work! This article shows a lot of potential. Ktoconnell (talk) 18:49, 17 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

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The article looks good so far. The information on the right side and bottom of the page looks well executed and very detailed, and the external links are helpful and relevant. The paragraph introducing Glenview Mansion summarizes what will be the remainder of the article in a very Wikipedia-way. It would be nice to future see sections about the events mentioned in the first paragraph and history of the building and space. Additional pictures for these sections would also be helpful to add to the article. So far the article seems in line with Wikipedia standards, great first draft. --Mkh1206 (talk) 20:51, 17 November 2015 (UTC)Reply