User talk:Bdewhurst17/sandbox
Bdewhurst17's peer review
editOverall, your two sections add some much needed info into the article. They are clear and easy to read/understand, and do not seem to portray any bias or particular point of view. They also fit in well with the structure of the rest of the article, and feel like a natural extension. Good job! Notes for improvement below:
HIV Prevention -If possible, I think it would help to provide a source for the statement "The Population Council provides programs all over the world that aim to address the prevention and treatment of the HIV virus," other than the one example you cited. -The example you cite helps the article! Gender-Based Violence -I think you could add information from the Pop council's website on their efforts to combat genital mutilation and domestic violence. [1] -Again, I think your example helps! Mikerailey (talk) 03:49, 3 April 2018 (UTC)