Your submission at Articles for creation: Deirdre Eberly Lashgari (November 19)

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AngusWOOF (barksniff) 20:30, 19 November 2018 (UTC)Reply
 
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Shelby's Peer Review

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Your first source cuts in between the o and r in the word translator.

Your first sentence is a little long.

Add an s at the end of bachelor

Change Lang to Languages

Remove the period between war and they in the "works" section

Capitalize the H in "her story..."

Can you add something about her death since you mentioned her husband died two weeks after she did?

It looks good! I really like the lead that you have.

Srbtx (talk) 22:45, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Deirdre Eberly Lashgari

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