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Hello, I am one of your peer reviewers. Your additions were well written and pretty much free of grammatical errors and typos. You have a very solid non-partisan voice when discussing the political implications of transhumanism. What you plan to add to the directed evolution article in the future sounds good. The biggest issue I can see with your writing is not including links to other related articles. I don't know if you are just planning to do this at the end for the final draft, maybe? It kind of needs links to other articles, especially for some of the technologies such as brain-computer interfaces you mentioned. Other than the needed addition of those links, this was a good job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Atjaffery (talk • contribs) 16:34, 17 November 2017 (UTC)