User talk:Atian117/Gentile Bellini

Hey Atian117, I completed my peer review of your article so you can check that out whenever you get a chance! Good job on that by the way! -Guineptree (talk) 04:07, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

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You copied the content over without first clicking on the edit button, so the formatting is messed up. That needs to be fixed. Some other things with regards to content

1. Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to include opinions, so describing something as "unfortunate" (even when it is something as significant as the destruction of most of his paintings) should be avoided.
2. You need to be precise. The "Date of birth debate" section you say "Some say" which is the kind of phrasing that the Manual of Style says to avoid. That section also needs more sources, or at least needs to include the source at the end of the first paragraph. I'm also curious as to whether there are any more recent sources. A single source from 1963 doesn't seem like a strong source to assert that something is a debate.
3. Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization. Only the first word (and any proper nouns) should be capitalized. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:22, 15 December 2020 (UTC)