User talk:Ashleyhpace/sandbox

I think that you have done a great job adding new content to this page, particularly regarding the verbs. While they might be momentarily incomplete, the verb conjugation tables are an extremely helpful addition that helps create a far better understanding of french for the readers. I also really liked how you phrased your paragraph about nouns and how it was very clear in concise in its explanation of french nouns. Aside from a few stylistic elements, I believe that you have done an excellent job editing. I have some suggestions for possible additions/clarifications.

Firstly, in the second sentence of the noun paragraph, you said that French nouns are not inflected based on their gender, but after that you describe in detail how nouns are indeed inflected based on gender, in this case the word "enseignent" becoming "enseignente."

Secondly, as a possible addition to the current content, you could talk about how French adjectives are largely supposed to agree in gender and number with the nouns they describe.

Thirdly, another suggestion for adding content, in your paragraph about verbs, you can go even deeper into the topic and talk about how the moods and conjugations within French stem largely from Latin and its respective verbal rules.

Finally, you might want to add a transition between the two sentences about syntax in order to better connect their ideas.

Overall, I think that you've done a great job and I'm very excited to see the final product.

Esotericbubbba (talk) 23:11, 20 July 2017 (UTC)