This is a great improvement from the original article. The organization is much better than the original and is well-written in an unbiased tone. Perhaps consider changing the picture on the right to an information box, adding a childhood section and TED Talk section, differentiating the notable achievements and other notable career milestones, and combining the career sections to facilitate the appeal to the reader. Most importantly, it would be extremely helpful to read through some sections of the book to bolster some of the sections that are currently stubs.