User talk:Ashbyaa/sandbox

Comment on your article

Good work on adding a new section to this already lengthy article. The article is written in language that is conducive to understanding. You could use the linking option to link other related Wikipedia article to yours. You could also consider using the cite function to cite your sources onto the page. Currently it is not clear which sources contribute to each part of the article. This is a good start and I look forward to seeing the final product. Tomhoang18 (talk) 04:21, 13 April 2017 (UTC)