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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Smuse40 in topic Peer Review

I think your edits really provide more depth to the importance of the Twelve Tables, which is great. Maybe try to add more influences on modern history if you can -- the bit about James Madison is awesome. Chronologically, I think it would make more sense to talk about the influences on Roman society first, then the influences on later history after. Make sure to add citations, too!

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Hey Quaz! The addition of the influence and significance section was awesome! Really great reference to American Society. I think you could expand on the comparisons of the twelve tables to other societies. You still must cite your sources! I would recommend meeting with a librarian to find some more sources, but all in all, you are off to a good start! keep up the good work. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smuse40 (talkcontribs) 13:50, 21 April 2017 (UTC)Reply