Feedback about Sandbox content on 26.November 2006 by anmuelle ;-)
I think you're still working on your article, despite some feedback about your sandbox content... ;-)
- When you explain, why these different names in the very first section: I would maybe consider to put the explanation for the names into the brackets…
- “ It is a fast-growing, drought-resistant tree that is native to the southern foothills of the…” I think here the “that is” isn’t necessary…
- Soil pH: write the p in small letters, and H in big… i.e. pH not PH ;-)
- Production Area rather than production area dito cultivation practice vs. Cultivation Practise I would also write Countries (instead of countries) and Continents, and write the contintens all the same way, i.e. all big or small letters… ;-)
- “In India there are several insect pests, including various caterpillars like the bark-eatin…” I would replace “like” with “such as”
- “In some regions termites can also cause minor damages but if termites are numerous in soils the insects management costs are not bearable.” here I would make to sentences: In some regions termites can also cause minor damages. If Termites are numerous….
- “Moringa is particularly suitable for dry regions, as it can be grown using rainwater without expensive irrigation techniques.” ehm, somehow second part doesn’t make sense for me if you indicate in the other table irrigation is necessary if rain below 800 mm…