Anantvis

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:59, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

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Hi. Can you give me some more information on what you're trying to do? I'm guessing that your draft is in this section: User:Anantvis/sandbox#Modified_Article_Section_(_To_be_)? Is the part in bold at the end just a note to yourself?

I can't say whether a source would be appropriate unless I know which source and which statement. Without them, I don't know enough to answer your question. Could you do that and leave me a note on my talk page when you're ready? Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:10, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

OK, it looks good overall. The Associated Press is a reputable newswire service, so I think it's a perfectly acceptable source, although better sources probably exist (it's always worth trying to track down scholarly sources). Beyond that, I'd say you should copyedit your work - for example, there shouldn't be spaces before periods, and you use "it's" in one place where you should use "its".

You should also add links to other Wikipedia articles. Topics and terms that are likely to be unfamiliar to the average reader should be linked the first time they appear in the article. For example, there's an article about the Marine Mammal Protection Act. Link to it. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

You have an overdue training assignment.

Please complete the assigned training modules. --Dcebbie (talk) 12:25, 21 April 2018 (UTC)