Hello AnAnonymousStudent, this is to let you know that I've revised your translation and you can see the changes at this link. Several are cosmetic (such as the type of speech marks used), but you also have a tendency to translate the French historic present with a simple present, which comes across less naturally in English. It's a good translation, on the whole. It will need some more work before it can be moved to the main Wikipedia pages (to include internal links, images, and above all references). --MHAN2016 (talk) 19:23, 3 May 2021 (UTC)