Almajacinto
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Hello, Almajacinto, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:28, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review for HIV/AIDS in the United States edit
Hi! My name is Jennifer and I selected your article to peer review. I liked how you added the statistic regarding how many gay and bisexual men are affected with HIV. I was curious if this statistic is current to 2017? Was there a specific reason why you placed this statistic after the previous sentence regarding AIDS? I was also wondering if there were other statistics regarding women. Thanks! Fungjennifer1 (talk) 22:54, 10 November 2017 (UTC)
Aloha Alma, I'm Kekai and I chose to look at the work you did on Derek Jarman's page. I like how the added detail and information regarding "Dancing Ledge" gives a "preview-type" glimpse into the work, sharing some of his motivations to do the piece. It definitely added to the clarity of that section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kavilez (talk • contribs) 04:33, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
Plague Article edit
Your proposed edits the CCBA article look fantastic. I think all three of your suggestions make sense and would greatly improve that article! Really nice start! Professorsmith (talk) 15:02, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
Chinese Consolidated Benevolent Association edit
You could create a subsection within the San Francisco part, which covers the history. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:01, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
Hey Almajacinto! I noticed you are going to work on a history of CCBA. I am also doing a variation of the history; or their economic, political, and social impacts to be more specific. I have wrote a little bit in my sandbox, feel free to look at it. Or we can work together for a combined history section or neither. Just thought I'd reach out.