Alliewoodlee
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editHello, Alliewoodlee, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:21, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
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editHi! The main thing that your article needed was to be formatted to fit the general layout of Wikipedia biography articles, which I've done. It could also use a little explanation as to what her job was at the hospital. I moved the information about her death to a personal life section. Also, if possible - can you find information about her child and husband, specifically when she married and when she had her child, as well as if it's his child. I presume that it is, but the last names are different so I can't state that he is in the article. I think that this is ready to move live whenever you are ready and the aforementioned things are all stuff that you can work on while the article is live. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:37, 29 April 2020 (UTC)