User talk:Alexpiersonn/sandbox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Kate3925 in topic Feedback

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Organized, Sensible order? Need to have a title of what they are talking about Good two paragraphs Good example Needs to have headings and subheadings and organized better Extra stuff? No unnecessary stuff Off topic? No gives a good example All perspectives represented? Not all perspectives have been represented Guess the perspective? No, they are writing about sexism in the media already Neutral? I think this article is fairly neutral They use quotes from other sources so they don't show an opinion Claims on behalf of unnamed groups? No Negative or positive light? It seems the article is a little more negative than positive but it is a negative subject Reliable sources? Good sources not many opinionated blogs good academic sources Article do well? Very good at citing sources and quoting Good writing style looks like a wiki article Not do well? Needs to be organized better Need more information on what you are writing about

Kate3925 (talk) 14:55, 17 March 2016 (UTC)Reply