RMIT Design Hub edit

I have reviewed your article on RMIT Design Hub, reducing the number of vague claims and phrases such as "most unique" - something is either unique, or it isn't.
I have also added categories and the RMIT Template at the bottom - which now includes the Design Hub.
The only thing I haven't managed to sort are your pictures. These do not seem to have uploaded correctly on WP:Commons, so I cannot help you there. I am no expert on images, but wonder if this is due to size - the facade is over 8Mb and the interior is 1.3Mb, whereas the detailed section, which does show, is only 380Kb. Can I suggest you try reducing the file size and uploading these again - I have left the non-showing images in the article for the moment but will take them out shortly as they are distracting.
Any questions please ask on my talk page - click on (talk) after my name - Arjayay (talk) 09:17, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

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