Agilmer1

Joined 18 September 2014

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Adam (Wiki Ed) in topic Colette Whiten

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Colette Whiten

Latest comment: 9 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I left a few comments on your draft here. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:17, 5 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

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Hey @Agilmer1: I am providing support for your wmst250 class at UMD.

Here are some of my suggestions
The exhibitions in your article do not provide the information that the reader needs in order to gain the proper information. It enlightens the reader that Colette had many exhibits but it does not provide the significance.

Thanks for your work User:Jack(wiki ed) (User talk:Jack (Wiki ed)) 13:12 25 November 2014 (UTC)

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