User talk:Adhenson1/sandbox2

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Sctomlin

It seems you have a great start to your article on Mass Personal Communication. I would like to see more information in your lead in section to better understand the group or focus you will have for the remainder of your article. It is nice that you have already created and labeled your sections on what you will expand on, but again I would like to know more information about your article in the introductory paragraph. Cool topic that relates mass communication and interpersonal communication all in one! Sctomlin (talk) 20:46, 20 November 2018 (UTC) sctomlinReply