AL035565
Joined 28 August 2019
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Naraht in topic Alpha Gamma Rho
Alpha Gamma Rho
editI've reviewed your additions to the Alpha Gamma Rho articles. Most of it looks good, however I have a few points.
- The chapters should only be on the page for that, List of Alpha Gamma Rho chapters.
- Some sort of description should be made of Brothers of the Century. I'm not sure it belongs in the article, it may make more sense in the Notable members article, if in fact most of the them are notable.
- The History isn't neutrally written. "Became a reality"??? It needs to be toned down in a way that you can't tell if it was written by a brother or not.
- The Four pillars paragraph, I think belongs in another section.
Hope to hear from you so that the article can be improved still more.Naraht (talk) 18:14, 28 August 2019 (UTC)
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