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Your submission at Articles for creation: Joona Sotala (November 24)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Joona Sotala instead.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 15:30, 24 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Continuation War / Chapter Soviet Union/ Material losses

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hi!

You have edited 6 December 2018: Of material losses, authors Jowett and Snodgrass state that 697 Soviet tanks were destroyed[160] and Finnish war historian Matti Koskimaa calculated that the Soviet Union suffered 55 tanks captured, 673 trucks captured, 306 artillery pieces captured, 300 tractors captured and 303 aircraft destroyed.[187]

1. I haven't read Jowett and Snodgrass referenced but the number of 697 tanks destroyed is about the number destroyed in summer 1944 on Karelian Isthmus only. This article is about the whole Continuation War. So you should have here the estimate of the whole war!

2. The Koskimaa study handles the summer 1944 battles on Karelian Isthmus only. You have the publishing year wrong. The right year is 1993. There are no numbers for Soviet Material losses of the whole war and specially no numbers of captured materials at all. If I'm wrong tell me the page where the numbers come from. The other possibility is to edit the right numbers with right references, please!

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With Best Regards, LasseSakari (talk) 15:58, 12 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

^ Koskimaa, Matti (1993). Veitsen terällä : vetäytyminen Länsi-Kannakselta ja Talin-Ihantalan suurtaistelu kesällä 1944 (in Finnish). Porvoo: WSOY. ISBN 9510188115.

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[1] Koskimaa, Matti (1993). Veitsen terällä : vetäytyminen Länsi-Kannakselta ja Talin-Ihantalan suurtaistelu kesällä 1944 (in Finnish). Porvoo: WSOY. ISBN 9510188115.

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