November 2022

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  Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia. Your edits appear to be disruptive and have been or will be reverted.

Please ensure you are familiar with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, and please do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive. Continued disruptive editing may result in loss of editing privileges. Thank you. Acroterion (talk) 12:24, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Don’t conflate nationality with ethnicity per the manual of style. You can provide context without stringing multiple nationalities and ethnicities in one long clump. The way you keep trying to reword conflicts with WP practice on Jew-tagging. Acroterion (talk) 12:26, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Strakosch was both Jewish and a supporter of Zionism. You do not have to be Jewish to be a Zionist - Churchill was a Zionist, but not a Jew. (2A00:23C5:C410:5601:5D95:7702:6DF6:B225 (talk) 12:29, 22 November 2022 (UTC))Reply
I think we've got a lede that works and gets the point across without trying to cram it all into one sentence with too many adjectives. Acroterion (talk) 13:11, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply