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February 2019

Hello, I'm Donner60. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Scott McAfee, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Donner60 (talk) 03:47, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

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I also would remove the word "tender" because it looks like it was copied from an uncited source. I suggest that you add a few citations. I assume (correctly, I hope) that some web pages exist that would support the teaching and the participation in conventions. It might also be useful if a web page referring to the National Guard Service could be cited. These do not have to be from college, convention or National Guard sites, necessarily, but can be from newspaper, magazine or web site sources, including interviews, from third party sources. Otherwise, I think the edit, with the omissions noted by you and "tender" would be neutral and non-controversial enough that no one would object to the addition. I would not. Donner60 (talk) 05:00, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

Do not upload any personal papers, personal pictures, id numbers, etc. If you cannot cite a public document or use a picture in the public domain (newspaper, web page, etc.), don't cite anything. I am glad to have another opportunity to comment before you go ahead. I suggest not stating the reason for your medical discharge. I think that is private and I cannot see it as being necessary or helpful to you or the reader. Also, I would omit the "semi-retirement" statement unless that is in a public source, for the same reasons. If it is in a public source, the reason given there could be restated. Besides, it is sort of ambiguous anyway. (Your first edit is in the article history though I think few people look at that. If you want that deleted too, an administrator will need to do it and that information should be on the Wikipedia page previously mentioned.) If you have a listing on any of the college web sites, that would be useful. Donner60 (talk) 05:44, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

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