1untouched

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Hello, 1untouched, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:37, 14 September 2018 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! Here are my notes:

Be careful of tone. I'm a little worried that this comes across as a persuasive essay at points, so make sure that you aren't taking a specific stance in the article. Also make sure that any claims are backed up with reliable sources and that any major claims or viewpoints are attributed to a specific person (ie, "According to...").

The sources look good, as they don't appear to be studies as far as I can tell, at least from what I've seen. If they are (ie, they held a research study where they surveyed a group of people as opposed to something that reviews existing literature), then you will need to get a secondary source for these. Since this does brush up against health topics, I would recommend taking this training module just in case.

I hope this helps and have a good Thanksgiving! --Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:15, 21 November 2018 (UTC)