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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Michelev in topic Feedback on 2nd draft

Feedback on 2nd draft

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As already noted, citations need fixing. Image caption could be a little more detailed. Longer paragraphs should be split into smaller paragraphs, for easier reading online.

Michelev (talk) 19:14, 16 April 2014 (UTC)Reply