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Your submission at Articles for creation: Association for Community Colleges (September 3)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There is a very great deal wrong with the text and tone. Wikipedia doesn't have any interest in magazine narrative tone, nor in anything akin to drawing a conclusion. "Thus" draws a conclusion, as does "hence" and the quote prior to the latter is not required.

"can be traced back". Can it? We do not need possibility, we need facts, please. Same with "the historical context of the views of the ACC was the ever closer and wider " which is narrative, not facts.

Rather than my picking every sentence apart please edit this for tone, please remove your own POV, and cute, cut, and cut again

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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 07:36, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

I never remember submitting it 146.255.74.134 (talk) 15:20, 26 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, 146.255.74.232! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 07:36, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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