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Your submission at Articles for creation: Second Chance (Christianity) (March 30)

Latest comment: 3 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by LJF2019 were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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LJF2019 ^talk 11:16, 30 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hello, 122.132.184.97! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LJF2019 ^talk 11:16, 30 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Second Chance (Christianity) (July 14)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

tone is not acceptable

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 07:15, 14 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Second Chance (Christianity) (July 17)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tol was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The tone of this draft is still not encyclopedic enough to be published. Also, note that pronouns to refer to deities and prophets should not be capitalised; see MOS:GOD.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Tol | talk | contribs 01:57, 17 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:Second Chance (Christianity) has a new comment

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Second Chance (Christianity). Thanks! Antan O 17:27, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Second Chance (Christianity) (July 21)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

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— Bilorv (talk) 10:17, 21 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Copyright problem: Draft:Second Chance (Christianity)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! We welcome and appreciate your contributions, such as Draft:Second Chance (Christianity), but we regretfully cannot accept copyrighted text or images from either web sites or printed works. This article appears to contain work copied from https://remnant-95127.medium.com/second-chance-for-the-dead-a72249cdeab1 https://www.amazon.com/dp/B002CGRBJ8, and therefore to constitute a violation of Wikipedia's copyright policies. The copyrighted text has been or will soon be deleted. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with our copyright policy. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators are liable to be blocked from editing.

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Thank you, and please feel welcome to continue contributing to Wikipedia. Happy editing! — Bilorv (talk) 10:20, 21 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Second Chance (Christianity) (July 25)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Theroadislong was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia.

Theroadislong (talk) 13:38, 25 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

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