User talk:1-800-OWLZ/NMAC 3108 Journal
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Acm2625 in topic Harrison Jones Peer Review
@ 1-800-OWLZ Hello Harrison! I think it is great that you already have some experience with Wikipedia. I have no prior knowledge but I'm excited to learn. I hope you have a great semester! Kehli.west (talk) 18:02, 1 June 2019 (UTC)
Harrison Jones Peer Review
editHello Harrison Hope your day is well! After reviewing the Peer review section in our training library, I'm going to try and do my best to give you constructive feedback on your article. In the training module it mentioned five steps; A lead section that is easy to understand, A clear structure, Balance coverage, Neutral content and reliable sources. I'm not sure if you are in the process of making changes or if you have started already? I'm just basing my peer review off of what I see now. I think the article Museum of Arts and Sciences (Macon Georgia) is maybe in progress. However I think it has solid grounds to be very good. When I go to a wiki museum page the first thing I think I would like to know is about the location and place. I think this article has great potential to have clear structure. I think I would add some more headings in the article such as an Art section to tell a little about what the museum may offer.(I would go into detail about what exhibits are offered). The article already has a history section which is great. The punctuation and citations seem to be good. I didn't see any broken links. I think I would find more sources to add more information about the museum. Overall I think your doing a great job. Let me know if your adding more content. I hope you have a great semester!-Acm2625 (talk) 18:24, 28 June 2019 (UTC)Acm2625