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August 2022

Hello, I'm Nihonjoe. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Barley tea have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 18:14, 30 August 2022 (UTC)

Hello, Nihonjoe. If you say my contribution is promotional, is it limited after the part “In 1963, Hitachi-ya-Honpo•••”, doesn’t it? I think you didn't have to undone all of my contribution. How do you think? 愛を下さい (talk) 22:36, 30 August 2022 (UTC)

Since all of it was done in a single edit, the entire edit was undone. The spammy part is from “In 1963, Hitachi-ya-Honpo...” on. To add back the part before that, you will need to include a reliable source that can be used to verify the information. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 16:48, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

Then if I add reliable source, can I rewrite it? 愛を下さい (talk) 07:07, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Yes, if it's a reliable source. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 17:30, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

I rewrite this page. Please check it. 愛を下さい (talk) 06:56, 3 September 2022 (UTC)