User:Yayun Zheng/Dropping a Han Dynasty Urn (1995)/Tuh20608 Peer Review
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General info
edit- Whose work are you reviewing?
Yayun Zheng
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- Dropping a Han Dynasty Urn (1995)Dropping a Han Dynasty Urn (1995)
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Dropping a Han Dynasty Urn (1995)
Evaluate the drafted changes
editIt was a good start to the article. It wasn't biased, there wasn't any opinionated language used. It was straightforward and easy to understand. There were a few grammatical errors, but I had edited them to better the flow of it. There could be more information, but that will come with time. My one concern is about the sources used. I saw a lot of the ones you had were from websites or online magazines. I'm not quite sure if that is okay, unless you were given the "okay" for them, I just don't want all your work to disappear or something to happen because of the sources. Perhaps stick to peer reviewed articles like from JSTOR for example. Other than that, I can't wait to read more about this topic, it's very interesting.