Needs Improvement Articles edit

Crème brûlée Article

  • This article needs an improved Ingredients format. The bullet list not in a linear format looks strange.
  • The Technique section should be above the Crema Catalana section
  • There is a link to a page that does not exist
  • The layout of the photos could be improved; showing images of different steps of the item could be helpful as opposed to only showing the finished product

Pop Music Article

  • The content could be more expanded with the sub-genres
  • The stylistic section is dense and needs to be broken into parts
  • the callouts on the side with quotations seem random and not useful
  • a time period is missing in the stylistic evolution section


Potential Articles to Edit edit

Walt Disney Classics

Electronic rock

Hawaiiloa

@Etherfire:

Walt Disney Classics edit

List of Problems edit

  • Needs to be copy edited
  • The table of contents looks overwhelming
  • "Prehistory" title could be changed
  • The organization of the sub-subcategories under "North American release history" can have a different format to differentiate it from the timeline sub titles
  • Some sections need a more informative title
  • Has tags at the top of page

Tasks edit

  • copy edit
  • edit titles
  • reformat sub-subcategories
  • reorganize table of contents

Hawaiiloa edit

List of Problems edit

  • article does not clarify if it covers the mythical concept of Hawaiiloa or the modern day canoe
  • article is more focused on the mythical god but uses a photo of the canoe
  • needs subcategories
  • style and tone needs to reflect encyclopedic tone

Tasks edit

  • copy edit
  • edit to match encyclopedic tone
  • create subcategory about the modern use of Hawaiiloa
  • add photo to match the focus of mythical god