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Needs Improvement Articles edit
- This article needs an improved Ingredients format. The bullet list not in a linear format looks strange.
- The Technique section should be above the Crema Catalana section
- There is a link to a page that does not exist
- The layout of the photos could be improved; showing images of different steps of the item could be helpful as opposed to only showing the finished product
- The content could be more expanded with the sub-genres
- The stylistic section is dense and needs to be broken into parts
- the callouts on the side with quotations seem random and not useful
- a time period is missing in the stylistic evolution section
Potential Articles to Edit edit
Walt Disney Classics edit
List of Problems edit
- Needs to be copy edited
- The table of contents looks overwhelming
- "Prehistory" title could be changed
- The organization of the sub-subcategories under "North American release history" can have a different format to differentiate it from the timeline sub titles
- Some sections need a more informative title
- Has tags at the top of page
Tasks edit
- copy edit
- edit titles
- reformat sub-subcategories
- reorganize table of contents
Hawaiiloa edit
List of Problems edit
- article does not clarify if it covers the mythical concept of Hawaiiloa or the modern day canoe
- article is more focused on the mythical god but uses a photo of the canoe
- needs subcategories
- style and tone needs to reflect encyclopedic tone
Tasks edit
- copy edit
- edit to match encyclopedic tone
- create subcategory about the modern use of Hawaiiloa
- add photo to match the focus of mythical god