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Wikipedia's Junie B. Jones article for ENGL9876.99

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Analysis of Article

Issues with my current article that need to be addressed:

1. The introduction of the article is short and doesn't give enough information of what the article is about.
2. There are a few grammatical errors that need to be fixed.
3. There should be a few pictures to show who the article is about, so people can put a face to the name.

Reading List

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• Park, Barbara. (1992) Junie B. Jones and the Stupid Smelly Bus
• Park, Barbara. (1993) Junie B. Jones and a Little Monkey Business
• Park, Barbara. (1993) Junie B. Jones and Her Big Fat Mouth
• Park, Barbara. (1995) Junie B. Jones and the Yucky Blucky Fruitcake
• Park, Barbara. (1997) Junie B. Jones Has a Monster Under Her Bed
• Park, Barbara. (1997) Junie. B Jones Is Not a Crook
• Park, Barbara. (1997) Junie. B Jones Is a Party Animal
• Park, Barbara. (1998) Junie. B Jones Is a Beauty Shop Guy
• Park, Barbara. (1998) Junie B. Jones Smells Something Fishy
• Park, Barbara. (1999) Junie B. Jones Is (Almost) a Flower Girl
• Park, Barbara. (1999) Junie B. Jones And The Mushy Gushy Valentine
• Park, Barbara. (2000) Junie B. Jones Has a Peep in Her Pocket
• Park, Barbara. (2003) Junie B., First Grader: Cheater Pants

Revised paragraph from article

Original

Junie B. Jones is a children's book series written by Barbara Park and illustrated by Denise Brunkus. The stories are written in the first person.

Revised

Junie B. Jones is a mixture of fiction and non-fiction children's book series written by Barbara Park and illustrated by Denise Brunkus. The Junie B. Jones book series were published by Random House. This book series lasted from 1992-2013. The Junie B. Jones' stories are written in first person as Junie B. Jones, herself. In the first book that started all, Junie B. Jones and the Stupid Smelly Bus, we learned that Junie was an "almost six year old" who was starting her first day of Kindergarten.

Original Contribution

As the books of Junie goes on, so does the laughter that this little girl gets from you while she informs you on the different events she has happen in her life. Good and Bad.