Hi Nosebagbear
Thank you so very much for that redraft!
If there is more at fault please let me know, when you do, thanks?
Not so important, but there is a photograph of my subject already in the Wiki system (it's my own work and I loaded it a few days ago. It's at "Images: Michael Hartland". But can't for the life of me find a way of adding it to the article? Is there one? Is it something you can do using the system which is eluding me so well?!
Many thanks Shadwell Basin