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Precious Golden's Wikipedia's Cosmetology article for ENGL1101.62

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• Beauty School Directory. (2004). "What is a Cosmetologist?"

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Cosmetology (from Greek κοσμητικός, kosmētikos, "beautifying";^[1] and -λογία, -logia) is the study and application of beauty treatment. Branches of specialty includes hairstyling, skin care, cosmetics, manicures/pedicures, and electrology.

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A cosmetologist is someone who is an expert in the care of hair and makeup as well as skincare and beauty products. Cosmetologists are expanded into multiple fields including cutting and chemically treating hair, chemical hair removal without a sharp blade, fashion trends, wigs, nails and skin care, skin and hair analysis; relaxation techniques including head, neck, scalp, hand and feet basic massage and aroma therapies; plus ability to expertly apply makeup applications to cover or promote and can expand into further specialties such as reflexology; theatrical applications; cosmetics and others as listed below.They can also offer other services such as coloring, extensions, and straightening. Cosmetologists help their clients improve on or acquire a certain look by applying advance trending aesthetic applications to persons such as career goaled or undergoing stress that may hinder a favorable inner & exterior self-image. Hair stylists often style hair for weddings, proms, and other special events in addition to routine hair styling.

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