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Potential Articles edit
I selected this section because the character section is too long and drawn out. There is too much plot written in the descriptions of the characters that need to be removed so the section is more concise.
The whole article is written in an essay/persuasive style instead of within the Wikipedia guidelines. The format is also not written correctly and can be reformed.
The specific section of Nazi-Era Germany needs to be reformatted and some information needs to be added to be more clear. I also think that the information that needs to be added is pretty important to the censorship within Nazi Germany.
This section as a whole needs to be reformatted so that it fits the Wikipedia format. There is good information in the article, but it needs to be changed into a clearer and more readable presentation.
This article is very in-depth, but the name section needs to be reformatted to be read in a clearer way. There are also a lot of suggestions for the names that need to be included, so taking all of them into account and making an easy list to see them better.
Reference Articles edit
This is not a featured article, but it is relevant to my article about the curly girl method. It was hard to find a story that related to this article while also serving as an example.
This is a featured article that can serve as an example for the Latin pop page because they are both music pages.
This article is a good article that can serve as an article example for the Geronimo Stilton page because they are both books for children.
Notes on Article History edit
Nov. 11, 2020- reorganized characters better Oct. 22, 2020- characters roughly listed, but too many Dec. 19, 2020- characters added with a lot of spin-off characters May 16, 2021- character order was restructured and removal of a lot of extra information Aug. 24, 2022- characters from other spin-offs removed
April 12, 2016- 'variations' changed and added Oct. 29, 2017- fixing styling and layout errors Jan. 19, 2020- fixed 'descriptions' and added some instructions Oct. 7, 2021- added 'external links'