Truth and Reconciliation Commission (Canada)
-The article that discusses the Truth and Reconciliation Commission of Canada has two warning banners at the top of the article
-The author(s) inserted IRS in a paragraph without stating what that means, this leads to the reader having to figure it out themselves.
-The "Commission" section in the article includes a large number of direct quotes. It should instead be paraphrased.
-Headings throughout the article could be improved.
-In the "background" sub-header in the article, there should be citations at the end of the first and second paragraphs.
-References #5 and #18 provide links that are no longer valid. They are both CBC articles from 2008 and 2009 respectively. Should be updated.
WEEK 3
Jason Loutitt
Articles:
Suthers, L. (2007, 06). Runners mark anniversary of longboat win. Windspeaker Retrieved from http://ezproxy.uwindsor.ca.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/docview/345061126?accountid=14789
Regional athletic award recipients shine aboriginal coaching awards and tom longboat awards]. (2002, 04). Windspeaker Retrieved from http://ezproxy.uwindsor.ca.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/docview/345054773?accountid=14789
[2] Christie, J. (2007, Apr 14). Longboat's legacy. The Globe and Mail Retrieved from http://ezproxy.uwindsor.ca.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/docview/383439702?accountid=14789
"FORMER GEN7 MESSENGER JASON LOUTTIT WINS CALGARY MARATHON." States News Service, 31 May 2011. Academic OneFile, ezproxy.uwindsor.ca/login?url=http://go.galegroup.com/ps/i.do?p=AONE&sw=w&u=wind05901&v=2.1&id=GALE%7CA264241240&it=r&asid=7abbe7028dbcd972bb0e0d6271f0f6bb. Accessed 17 Oct. 2017.
Regional award recipients role models themselves. (2002, 04). Ontario Birchbark, 1, 10. Retrieved from http://ezproxy.uwindsor.ca.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.ledproxy2.uwindsor.ca/docview/196616055?accountid=14789
[3] Thomas Omwenga Three Times Lucky in Today's 2010 BMO Vancouver Marathon. (2010, May 5). ENP Newswire. Retrieved from http://ezproxy.uwindsor.ca/login?url=http://go.galegroup.com.ezproxy.uwindsor.ca/ps/i.do?p=AONE&sw=w&u=wind05901&v=2.1&it=r&id=GALE%7CA231838355&asid=18bf6eb6dca41a9ce83c3d77b56a7435
For this article, I plan to highlight the successes of Jason Loutitt over the years. He was a regional recipient of the Tom Longboat Award in 2001 and that should be recognized in the article. There are quite a few winners who have yet to be recognized by the public and this page will be a small but valuable step in increasing the awareness of the involvement of the Indigenous in Canadian sport history.
Jason Loutitt
Jason Loutitt (......) is an indigenous cross country distance runner known as one of the best elite marathon runners in Canada [2].
He was named a regional recipient of the Tom Longboat award in 2001.
Former member of the Canadian Army serving in Princess Patricia's Canadian light infantry in Winnipeg [
Born in 1974 in Squamish, BC
Achievements
2nd place at 2010 BMO Vancouver Marathon (2:25:47)[3]
1st place at 2011 Calgary Marathon
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